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Givin' in (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
I look at these pieces of life
In my hands
I wonder where they came from
And where I can put them
Every piece I look at seems
Sharper than the one before
Nothing's perfectly clear
Inside me, all of this screams
Unable to be freed
Again I gze at these pieces
In my hand, and they all seem
So fucking useless
Like fate has already spoken what
My last day is to be
I'm not gonna fight it
I can't any more
I fell down and never got up again
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.880797
Overall Rank: 10157
Posted: November 8, 2003 8:45 AM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2003 8:45 AM PST
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