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Love (pyramus and thisbe) (Free verse) by New Life Drug
I remember the dawn
of words and loving ears
We must not part at dusk
for it kept you waiting here
The more the flame is covered up
the hotter it burns
and so we slipped away
But it lead to our one urn
And now deep red berries
that were once snow white
grow between our ashes
As we escape into the night
I too can be brave
I too can love
Let me take this knife
covered in your blood
Drive it into the heart of mine
death closes your eyes
But it will not part us
from where you lay
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3550
Posted: November 8, 2003 11:00 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2003 11:00 PM PST
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