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sunrise at kofa (Ode) by unknown^user
if the hills sing then the valleys mourn
and the clouds weep for their own weaknesses
this sort of silence is deafening
and when the lips again begin to flutter,
and the sounds unite into emotions
you become oblivious, deaf to all
if the hills sing and the valleys mourn
then the smiles we carry become unintentional
these sort of smiles are irrelevant
but when the dawn smiles down
and the eyes unite in an unfettered gaze,
we have again lost, defeated by it all
When the silence was deafening
I became oblivious, and alone
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.1666665
Weighted score: 5.313765
Overall Rank: 3570
Posted: May 7, 2004 7:24 PM PDT; Last modified: May 7, 2004 7:24 PM PDT
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