Free verse № 132479
i hung that page to dry
i set said paintbrush to the easel
of my flesh and let the flecks of paint
speak for the spoken silence
in a senseless reverie.
and let the silver strands of moonlight
dance upon my naked breast
as the curtains fell like fireworks
fall to the floor as ash.
i hung the photograph to dry
within the round red room
and turned the faucet on to mask the sound
of vomiting beyond the door.
I rubbed my fingers down the sides
of the moist and frigid toilet bowl
as the faucet bent like wires
bend and sag when meat is hung from them.
i scraped off all the wallpaper
with shredded fingernails
and littered marble and linoleum
with shaving-blood drop trails.
til all they heard from me was silence
like a silent willow tree.
as the curtains climbed like fireworks
climb through decaying leaves.
i hung that page to dry.
4 comments
fall to the floor as ash - maybe leave out fall.
the last two stanzas don't pack the punch the first 5 do.
this is a weak simile:
til all they heard from me was silence
like a silent willow tree.
all in all, you weaken the poem when you resolve it. ood, that.
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