| Re: a comment on Grind by INTRANSIT |
25-Nov-03/2:02 PM |
Ofcourse it is! with imagination? its up to the minds delight.
Sadly though, not many will actually go through the trouble to unravel a poem- its amazing how many people get turned off when they might need to jolt up the noggen.
In the end though, I feel a poem that has room for movement and is flexible in meaning and thought lives longer: theres room for it to evolve on its own.
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| Re: a comment on Grind by INTRANSIT |
25-Nov-03/12:03 PM |
Well.. yes, because theres a sickness with a good amount of readers- they think we have to imagine for them. (or be clear spoken and snub out the element of mystery.)
Its ok man, I'm on your side- everyones yammered at me for being "cryptic". Oh, and heres a ten.
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| Re: Revolution by Nitroxide |
25-Nov-03/11:49 AM |
I said the same thing when I was thirteen? And realized that it's much more complicated than that.
blessed with 6.
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| Re: Come home by phbiscuit |
24-Nov-03/11:21 PM |
Isolation didn't make me happy. Leaving my house and strolling in san fran for 5 days did wonders though.
Blessed with seven.
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| Re: a comment on untitled (suggestions wanted) by Don-Quixote |
24-Nov-03/10:56 PM |
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Yeah, but now I'm worried about the tips I'll give her. Usually no one pays attention my advice... You'll make sure to squash me when my advice is shit right?- Insurance for free?
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| Re: a comment on Teenage Guidance by Shit-Crumpets |
24-Nov-03/2:40 PM |
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folding beds and oxy-masks then ?. oi.. you've given me a brain fart again my friend, refresh & elucidate me.
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| Re: a comment on Mecca was mud in my backyard by Y2kSlamPoet |
24-Nov-03/2:28 PM |
My friend, it has been a long journey through words.
I've assumed many forms and views, staggered in the mud, strayed from my preconceptions, etc- while getting to know my strengths/flaws.
I've become confident of my abilities after being beaten & chastised to the max, even now- but honestly? I hope folks keep pounding the wooden hammer, wouldn't feel right otherwise.
Being told that I've become a good writer? Well, feels wierd- can't complain though, and DA will make sure it doesn't get to my head.
But group hugs must go- much too disturbing for my senses. ;]
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| Re: The drug prayer by Nitroxide |
23-Nov-03/4:02 PM |
micro sized version of poem:
Ive been a stoned fool
for six years
and counting
Hooked, a goner
with a pen- but
smugly famous
after ultra-od
and my poetry discoverd
under the porch by my lucky joint.
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| Re: The drug prayer by Nitroxide |
23-Nov-03/3:58 PM |
amt, 5meodipt, dpt? salvia? try those, very nice stuff.
heres a nine.
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| Re: a comment on Punchlining the opposition (Waltz with the inquisition) by SupremeDreamer |
23-Nov-03/11:31 AM |
Lets just say: If eminem heard me on a mic, he would shoot himself for being white. Plus I can't even strum a guitar.. well, could with one of those Hawaiian mini-ones maybe..
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| Re: a comment on Mecca was mud in my backyard by Y2kSlamPoet |
23-Nov-03/11:25 AM |
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Your mom isn't as evil as mine. YOU NEED TO CRANK THE EVIL SORDID GOO INTO YOUR MOTHER! lol, but you'd regret it.
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| Re: a comment on Murder means oil for Bush's coffer by DreamerSupreme |
23-Nov-03/11:17 AM |
Caducus was who got my brain crankin on war damnit! Send that cursed angel to him- had more than my fair share of time dabbling with that evil feathered foe of mine.
Plus anyway... I've heard him say pretentious and "dunce/dim-wit/retard" enough times to predict the gist of what he'll say.. usually.
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| Re: A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis |
23-Nov-03/7:01 AM |
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looks like your family has a potent poet gene. Overall, blessed with eight.
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| Re: a comment on Islands Of Our King by Caducus |
23-Nov-03/5:58 AM |
Ah, I see- wars always sick, screwed, and almost never proceeds as planned.
Your guaranteed to return as one form of energy or another. Heard the buzz is quite soothing- but I haven't travelled that far down the NDE highway, yet.. won't be soon, if im lucky.
But castles? -shrug- (Personaly, the bigman should upgrade to an Elysian Hilton.. toiletry in a keep is quite bad- stinks.)
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| Re: a comment on The Poemranker Poe-lease by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
15-Nov-03/3:33 PM |
well, no- he really must hammer his point into peoples skulls, 900 zeros? can you seriously not understand his distress?
the poem? it was funny- sarcasm and mock adherence to conformity, etc. 10!!!
I also support abortion and suicide clinics. Among other things. Im evil. Or thats what I've been told.
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| Re: a comment on Gen. Rockman & his dirt encrusted clicker brigade by Y2kSlamPoet |
15-Nov-03/3:20 PM |
Well.. I didn't accuse- horus did?
But its good you admit your shame.
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| Re: a comment on Gen. Rockman & his dirt encrusted clicker brigade by Y2kSlamPoet |
15-Nov-03/3:18 PM |
DA was the inspiration for Y2k's identity- the wigger thing, and yo yo doOOD.
But anyway, my alter ego aside: 18- a thing against authority in general, and a wonderful obsession with being an underdog.
No "homies"- a few trusted friends though, that i can count on-
and a huge book collection, left to me from my father, along with other things. Oh? And MPD. well, not really- since i control which face I'll be using from time to time.
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| Re: a comment on Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
14-Nov-03/10:49 PM |
I don't find it amusing.
But 900 zeros? Thats insane- rockmage must lack a life,
because that certainly requires intense concentrated clicking power to push 900 zeros on your work.
What did you do to piss him off that much? just wondering.
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| Re: Good Riddance by dragonfly |
14-Nov-03/9:57 PM |
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| Re: Rockmage, I was going to pay him... by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
14-Nov-03/9:44 PM |
look at dreamersupreme- none of my poems on him have a score higher than 5 (cept maybe one, or two)
shit happens? nutcrunch time?
(and what about that lump of coal? maybe im being paranoid)
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