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Revolution (Free verse) by Nitroxide A world washed with greed
I escape through my morning glory seeds
Fringed hearts
Growing tired,weary minds
Dreaming of the prophecy for peace
A breaking point in mankind
Bewildered by lies
Drowned by corporate tides
A simple sensation seeds in the soul
A powerful word echoes
In the mind...
REVOLUTION...
Time for change,mental transformations
With illuminating revelations
of a sick society
Clinging to superiority
One day a pure race will exist
protected by enlightment myst
Utopia...Nirvana
Itll come till then...
Raise your fist
Speakout and resist...
Up the ladder:
Pills
Down the ladder:
the universe is throbbing
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Posted: November 25, 2003 1:04 AM PST; Last modified: November 25, 2003 1:04 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6721 Comments:
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peaceseeker @ 24.97.224.6
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25-Nov-03/10:25 AM
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YES!!
I said the same thing when I was thirteen? And realized that it's much more complicated than that.
blessed with 6.
i like the intention but, i dont think we will ever have a Utopia, at least not one this earth, things can get better but they wont change, until people do
and people haven't changed that much at all since the time of the grecians, thats 2000+ years of human nature working against you it would be nice though (the utopia) -zarina 166 view(s)
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