|
|
Haunting Dreams (Free verse) by AtomIcPromIse
Iâd take back hell,
Before I took back you,
Itâd be a pleasure not a pain,
Kiss my dreams, pierce my vein,
And the tears fall,
Youâre voice echoes through the hall,
So now Iâm lying on the floor,
Pool of sweat, blood-and acid dripping.
And the dreams like fantasies are real,
But haunt me when I open my eyes,
The windows staring-streaks of red,
Upon my shadow faded blouse,
WHAT IS GOING ON IN THIS HOUSE!?!
I see your face and get scared,
Your mouth is silently screaming.
Youâre eyes shocked open,
Just like in my dream-
Where the acid drips from your fear inflicted face,
But I smiled and watched your skin peel away.
Thatâs what haunts me to this day.
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
| Graph | Votes |
10 |
|
0 | 0 |
9 |
|
0 | 0 |
8 |
|
2 | 0 |
7 |
|
0 | 0 |
6 |
|
1 | 0 |
5 |
|
0 | 0 |
4 |
|
0 | 0 |
3 |
|
0 | 0 |
2 |
|
0 | 0 |
1 |
|
0 | 0 |
0 |
|
1 | 0 |
|
Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6729
Posted: April 10, 2005 2:18 PM PDT; Last modified: April 10, 2005 2:18 PM PDT
View voting details
Comments:
126 view(s)
|