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Revolution (Free verse) by Nitroxide

A world washed with greed I escape through my morning glory seeds Fringed hearts Growing tired,weary minds Dreaming of the prophecy for peace A breaking point in mankind Bewildered by lies Drowned by corporate tides A simple sensation seeds in the soul A powerful word echoes In the mind... REVOLUTION... Time for change,mental transformations With illuminating revelations of a sick society Clinging to superiority One day a pure race will exist protected by enlightment myst Utopia...Nirvana Itll come till then... Raise your fist Speakout and resist...

SupremeDreamer 25-Nov-03/11:49 AM
I said the same thing when I was thirteen? And realized that it's much more complicated than that.

blessed with 6.




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