Re: From Hell, a Vilanelle by horus8	10-Dec-03/6:25 PM
Well, good vil.. very personal comments here.. feel like a peeper reading them, but reminds me of alot of things.. I'll shut-up now before it seems like I'm intruding. Anyway- blessed with nine.
Re: a comment on Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer	10-Dec-03/6:12 PM
You've met me and my friend robert? Well then, who are you?
Re: Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer	8-Dec-03/4:53 AM
Oh, CLS? Why not mention your reasons for zeroing my work this time? hrmm? or will you just zero it and say nothing as usual? Just curiouse.
Re: The Morning Star by Shardik	8-Dec-03/4:32 AM
be interesting to hear. 9
Re: a comment on Mr Zero? I know who you are. by DreamerSupreme	6-Dec-03/5:41 PM
I'm not bashing her, I'm letting her take her due credit for zeroing my work is all. Why would I bash you? Your just voicing your opinion. -shrug-
Re: a comment on Bruce Lee is a Lotus Ninja by Shit-Crumpets	4-Dec-03/9:57 PM
Excuse me? "preteen"? 18 isn't preteen, and I won't shut up.
Re: Spuna Vs. Turkeef by <{Baba^Yaga}>	28-Nov-03/3:46 AM
Who smokes meth again? Just making sure you know. Whats strange? it makes sense to me, somehow.. love it-utterly enamored by its twisted alienism. Actually? I'm fucking jealouse. But anyone who's anyone knows that. Ten on turkeef. Spuna smells- and my nigger cat liked it.
Re: As You Are by MacFrantic	27-Nov-03/10:59 PM
really???? ah. I got an answer! Heres a 2.
Re: Mr Zero? Your a coward. by DreamerSupreme	27-Nov-03/10:23 PM
Well shucks.. this write up got almost straight tens!? you guys, I can never be angry long- ya'll soon brighten up my day always. One of these days one of me pieces will get 6 average.. i feel it coming closer.. so elusive damnit. hope it isn't on this one though lol- that would be too ironic.
Re: a comment on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer	27-Nov-03/8:43 PM
it started with the title, it sprung into my mind all of a sudden late at night- dont fuck with mr haiku- then I thought "hrmm, haiku like a punker in the mosh pit? smashin." though, i was worried about it having been done before, but so far it seems im original & sparkin up my own twist on haiku. thank you for the comment and grade- need it since ive only just started doin these, and I just know 575- say something clever/reflective. its not easy as a street poet. ;/
Re: a comment on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer	27-Nov-03/8:27 PM
I thought modern haiku's more flexible? then again- poets these days break more rules, think I'll do some research on the haiku. senryu... someone give me a link for all poetic forms, been cravin a big crash course- and would love to know my options.
Re: a comment on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme	27-Nov-03/3:14 AM
Ah well, DreamerSupreme has been getting zeroed for about two months now- slowly and sporadically. But yesterday someone has zerobombed almost all of my poetry under SD- some which I was very proud of, or had high averages, like Aluminum Xena, Memoirs of a Monk, and Padres Gumbo. I usually don't care who gives the occassional anon zero- but in this case I do, simply to know and perhaps get a clue as to why they zerobombed me. I'm sure not anything close to a "mature" poet- I've done plenty of wild stunts. But zerobombing a persons entire archive? Never. I'm a roguish jester poet- not a pathetic one. Wouldn't even do it to the person that zerobombs me.
Re: a comment on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer	26-Nov-03/12:29 PM
You sir? Have inspired me again.
Re: a comment on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer	26-Nov-03/12:13 PM
Yes, I am blessed with many titles. And personalities. :)
Re: a comment on I told Mr. Haiku that actions speak louder than words by Y2kSlamPoet	26-Nov-03/12:12 PM
you know, i never would have guessed i'd be making haikus a few months ago- and now? I think I'm getting a knack for em. what did you think about the toothbrush one?
Re: a comment on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	26-Nov-03/12:45 AM
The title alone warned you.. atleast I knew it was going to be another delightful comic script: (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) It's not as if you weren't given a clue?
Re: a comment on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	25-Nov-03/9:48 PM
Prose? these poetic cartoon scripts started long ago- before I sprouted into an inkstained underling, why back then, I was not even a green-crusted seedling!! Tis a long standing tradition now- rankerfolk have witnessed such pieces being unveiled by many rankelders, underlings, prawnes- flyin fucktoads!? theres too many characters to name since its gone on so long. And now proserankers shall cherish the skit-tree born'n'rooted by our kind? Those bastards haven't even been moulded or green-crusted!!! UNWORTHY would-be-maybes? blasphemy!!! such profane suggestion is enough to bring about the coming of DarkFeather and his league of nude poopdeck-prawnes to spread the embrowning. BE SHAMED YOUR WRETCHED SPOKESMAN OF RANKER'PEN-SINS!!
Re: Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos	25-Nov-03/9:03 PM
reminds me of DA's "Gilded Stumps of Olde" but less of the baffle humor.. well, cmon now- its hard to beat stuff like: "beating a blindfolded slave about the pate with his left badmington racket, all the while lubricating him with a greased parson's nose." But you nearly matched that when you mentioned the turtle and rusted plumbing. should write up confrontation between Corp. Shin Shines & Captain Gaybrush Threepchoad- I'd pay to read it lol. Blessed with 8.
Re: Intersection by INTRANSIT	25-Nov-03/3:10 PM
Hrmm. well, its choppy flow suits it.. but that second gaze.. Perhaps phase? ;/ oi. Well, I'm known to braze- but today I flicker and smoke. Its very raw stuff, good though; it has room to form itself, and even change colors like a cameleon. I'll save my vote for now, second and third looks will probly change my outlook on it. much fun to be had with this piece.
Re: a comment on Grind by INTRANSIT	25-Nov-03/2:55 PM
Sounds wonderful! But ofcourse, we must begin the journey in Liege... then travel cross- sampling nipples ranging in size, form, and flavor- washing away various scarlet knuckle spots before we stroke a fresh bosom. My comrade.. we will carve a hall to rome; and it shall be great.