replying on Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer
10 Dec 2003, 6:12 PM
You've met me and my friend robert? Well then, who are you?
on Memory Fragment I (lets kill eachother) by SupremeDreamer
8 Dec 2003, 4:53 AM
Oh, CLS? Why not mention your reasons for zeroing my work this time? hrmm? or will you just zero it and say nothing as usual?
Just curiouse.
Just curiouse.
on The Morning Star by Shardik
8 Dec 2003, 4:32 AM
be interesting to hear. 9
replying on Mr Zero? I know who you are. by DreamerSupreme
6 Dec 2003, 5:41 PM
I'm not bashing her, I'm letting her take her due credit for zeroing my work is all.
Why would I bash you? Your just voicing your opinion. -shrug-
Why would I bash you? Your just voicing your opinion. -shrug-
replying on Bruce Lee is a Lotus Ninja by Shit-Crumpets
4 Dec 2003, 9:57 PM
Excuse me? "preteen"? 18 isn't preteen, and I won't shut up.
on Spuna Vs. Turkeef by <{Baba^Yaga}>
28 Nov 2003, 3:46 AM
Who smokes meth again? Just making sure you know.
Whats strange? it makes sense to me, somehow.. love it-utterly enamored by its twisted alienism. Actually? I'm fucking jealouse. But anyone who's anyone knows that.
Ten on turkeef. Spuna smells- and my nigger cat liked it.
Whats strange? it makes sense to me, somehow.. love it-utterly enamored by its twisted alienism. Actually? I'm fucking jealouse. But anyone who's anyone knows that.
Ten on turkeef. Spuna smells- and my nigger cat liked it.
on As You Are by MacFrantic
27 Nov 2003, 10:59 PM
really???? ah. I got an answer!
Heres a 2.
Heres a 2.
on Mr Zero? Your a coward. by DreamerSupreme
27 Nov 2003, 10:23 PM
Well shucks.. this write up got almost straight tens!?
you guys, I can never be angry long- ya'll soon brighten up my day always.
One of these days one of me pieces will get 6 average.. i feel it coming closer.. so elusive damnit. hope it isn't on this one though lol- that would be too ironic.
you guys, I can never be angry long- ya'll soon brighten up my day always.
One of these days one of me pieces will get 6 average.. i feel it coming closer.. so elusive damnit. hope it isn't on this one though lol- that would be too ironic.
replying on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer
27 Nov 2003, 8:43 PM
it started with the title, it sprung into my mind all of a sudden late at night- dont fuck with mr haiku- then I thought
"hrmm, haiku like a punker in the mosh pit? smashin."
though, i was worried about it having been done before, but so far it seems im original & sparkin up my own twist on haiku.
thank you for the comment and grade- need it since ive only just started doin these, and I just know 575- say something clever/reflective.
its not easy as a street poet. ;/
"hrmm, haiku like a punker in the mosh pit? smashin."
though, i was worried about it having been done before, but so far it seems im original & sparkin up my own twist on haiku.
thank you for the comment and grade- need it since ive only just started doin these, and I just know 575- say something clever/reflective.
its not easy as a street poet. ;/
replying on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer
27 Nov 2003, 8:27 PM
I thought modern haiku's more flexible? then again- poets these days break more rules, think I'll do some research on the haiku.
senryu... someone give me a link for all poetic forms, been cravin a big crash course- and would love to know my options.
senryu... someone give me a link for all poetic forms, been cravin a big crash course- and would love to know my options.
replying on An Angel from Venice Disappears by DreamerSupreme
27 Nov 2003, 3:14 AM
Ah well, DreamerSupreme has been getting zeroed for about two months now- slowly and sporadically.
But yesterday someone has zerobombed almost all of my poetry under SD- some which I was very proud of, or had high averages, like Aluminum Xena, Memoirs of a Monk, and Padres Gumbo.
I usually don't care who gives the occassional anon zero- but in this case I do, simply to know and perhaps get a clue as to why they zerobombed me.
I'm sure not anything close to a "mature" poet- I've done plenty of wild stunts. But zerobombing a persons entire archive? Never. I'm a roguish jester poet- not a pathetic one. Wouldn't even do it to the person that zerobombs me.
But yesterday someone has zerobombed almost all of my poetry under SD- some which I was very proud of, or had high averages, like Aluminum Xena, Memoirs of a Monk, and Padres Gumbo.
I usually don't care who gives the occassional anon zero- but in this case I do, simply to know and perhaps get a clue as to why they zerobombed me.
I'm sure not anything close to a "mature" poet- I've done plenty of wild stunts. But zerobombing a persons entire archive? Never. I'm a roguish jester poet- not a pathetic one. Wouldn't even do it to the person that zerobombs me.
replying on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer
26 Nov 2003, 12:29 PM
You sir? Have inspired me again.
replying on Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku by SupremeDreamer
26 Nov 2003, 12:13 PM
Yes, I am blessed with many titles. And personalities. :)
replying on I told Mr. Haiku that actions speak louder than words by Y2kSlamPoet
26 Nov 2003, 12:12 PM
you know, i never would have guessed i'd be making haikus a few months ago- and now? I think I'm getting a knack for em.
what did you think about the toothbrush one?
what did you think about the toothbrush one?
replying on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
26 Nov 2003, 12:45 AM
The title alone warned you.. atleast I knew it was going to be another delightful comic script: (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines)
It's not as if you weren't given a clue?
It's not as if you weren't given a clue?
replying on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
25 Nov 2003, 9:48 PM
Prose? these poetic cartoon scripts started long ago- before I sprouted into an inkstained underling, why back then, I was not even a green-crusted seedling!!
Tis a long standing tradition now- rankerfolk have witnessed such pieces being unveiled by many rankelders, underlings, prawnes- flyin fucktoads!? theres too many characters to name since its gone on so long.
And now proserankers shall cherish the skit-tree born'n'rooted by our kind? Those bastards haven't even been moulded or green-crusted!!! UNWORTHY would-be-maybes? blasphemy!!! such profane suggestion is enough to bring about the coming of DarkFeather and his league of nude poopdeck-prawnes to spread the embrowning. BE SHAMED YOUR WRETCHED SPOKESMAN OF RANKER'PEN-SINS!!
Tis a long standing tradition now- rankerfolk have witnessed such pieces being unveiled by many rankelders, underlings, prawnes- flyin fucktoads!? theres too many characters to name since its gone on so long.
And now proserankers shall cherish the skit-tree born'n'rooted by our kind? Those bastards haven't even been moulded or green-crusted!!! UNWORTHY would-be-maybes? blasphemy!!! such profane suggestion is enough to bring about the coming of DarkFeather and his league of nude poopdeck-prawnes to spread the embrowning. BE SHAMED YOUR WRETCHED SPOKESMAN OF RANKER'PEN-SINS!!
on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
25 Nov 2003, 9:03 PM
reminds me of DA's "Gilded Stumps of Olde"
but less of the baffle humor.. well, cmon now- its hard to beat stuff like:
"beating a blindfolded slave about the pate with his left badmington racket, all the while lubricating him with a greased parson's nose."
But you nearly matched that when you mentioned the turtle and rusted plumbing.
should write up confrontation between Corp. Shin Shines & Captain Gaybrush Threepchoad- I'd pay to read it lol.
Blessed with 8.
but less of the baffle humor.. well, cmon now- its hard to beat stuff like:
"beating a blindfolded slave about the pate with his left badmington racket, all the while lubricating him with a greased parson's nose."
But you nearly matched that when you mentioned the turtle and rusted plumbing.
should write up confrontation between Corp. Shin Shines & Captain Gaybrush Threepchoad- I'd pay to read it lol.
Blessed with 8.
on Intersection by INTRANSIT
25 Nov 2003, 3:10 PM
Hrmm. well, its choppy flow suits it.. but that second gaze.. Perhaps phase? ;/ oi.
Well, I'm known to braze- but today I flicker and smoke. Its very raw stuff, good though; it has room to form itself, and even change colors like a cameleon.
I'll save my vote for now, second and third looks will probly change my outlook on it. much fun to be had with this piece.
Well, I'm known to braze- but today I flicker and smoke. Its very raw stuff, good though; it has room to form itself, and even change colors like a cameleon.
I'll save my vote for now, second and third looks will probly change my outlook on it. much fun to be had with this piece.
Sounds wonderful! But ofcourse, we must begin the journey in Liege... then travel cross- sampling nipples ranging in size, form, and flavor- washing away various scarlet knuckle spots before we stroke a fresh bosom.
My comrade.. we will carve a hall to rome; and it shall be great.
My comrade.. we will carve a hall to rome; and it shall be great.
Anyway- blessed with nine.