Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku

by SupremeDreamer

Member since 2003 · Posted 26 Nov 2003 · 8 comments

He is very subtle; uses a few select words- then smashes your face.

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[9] INTRANSIT 26-Nov-03/6:03 AM Reply

Like Bruce Lee jumping out of a cherry blossom.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › INTRANSIT 26-Nov-03/12:29 PM Reply

You sir? Have inspired me again.

[6] kingit 26-Nov-03/7:05 AM Reply

disappointing...r u one of those multi-monickered ones?

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › kingit 26-Nov-03/12:13 PM Reply

Yes, I am blessed with many titles. And personalities. :)

[7] Caducus 27-Nov-03/3:13 AM Reply

says what a haiku does , a haiku about a haiku - novel idea 7

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › Caducus 27-Nov-03/8:43 PM Reply

it started with the title, it sprung into my mind all of a sudden late at night- dont fuck with mr haiku- then I thought

"hrmm, haiku like a punker in the mosh pit? smashin."

though, i was worried about it having been done before, but so far it seems im original & sparkin up my own twist on haiku.

thank you for the comment and grade- need it since ive only just started doin these, and I just know 575- say something clever/reflective.

its not easy as a street poet. ;/

[8] richa 27-Nov-03/8:36 AM Reply

More a senryu (a haiku has a nature theme). Giving this a nature theme would be impressive.

Good though, the soft feel of the words and then bang.

[n/a] SupremeDreamer › richa 27-Nov-03/8:27 PM Reply

I thought modern haiku's more flexible? then again- poets these days break more rules, think I'll do some research on the haiku.

senryu... someone give me a link for all poetic forms, been cravin a big crash course- and would love to know my options.