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Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku (Haiku) by SupremeDreamer He is very subtle;
uses a few select words-
then smashes your face.
Up the ladder:
I wish I had a friend
Down the ladder:
Sonnetias
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Posted: November 26, 2003 1:30 AM PST; Last modified: November 26, 2003 1:30 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.55 Overall Rank: 2479 Comments:
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INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46
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26-Nov-03/6:03 AM
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Like Bruce Lee jumping out of a cherry blossom.
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SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.170.78
> INTRANSIT
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26-Nov-03/12:29 PM
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You sir? Have inspired me again.
disappointing...r u one of those multi-monickered ones?
Yes, I am blessed with many titles. And personalities. :)
says what a haiku does , a haiku about a haiku - novel idea 7
it started with the title, it sprung into my mind all of a sudden late at night- dont fuck with mr haiku- then I thought
"hrmm, haiku like a punker in the mosh pit? smashin." though, i was worried about it having been done before, but so far it seems im original & sparkin up my own twist on haiku. thank you for the comment and grade- need it since ive only just started doin these, and I just know 575- say something clever/reflective. its not easy as a street poet. ;/
More a senryu (a haiku has a nature theme). Giving this a nature theme would be impressive.
Good though, the soft feel of the words and then bang.
I thought modern haiku's more flexible? then again- poets these days break more rules, think I'll do some research on the haiku.
senryu... someone give me a link for all poetic forms, been cravin a big crash course- and would love to know my options. 349 view(s)
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