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Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku (Haiku) by SupremeDreamer

He is very subtle; uses a few select words- then smashes your face.

richa 27-Nov-03/8:36 AM
More a senryu (a haiku has a nature theme). Giving this a nature theme would be impressive.

Good though, the soft feel of the words and then bang.




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