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Don't fuck with Mr. Haiku (Haiku) by SupremeDreamer

He is very subtle; uses a few select words- then smashes your face.

SupremeDreamer 27-Nov-03/8:43 PM
it started with the title, it sprung into my mind all of a sudden late at night- dont fuck with mr haiku- then I thought

"hrmm, haiku like a punker in the mosh pit? smashin."

though, i was worried about it having been done before, but so far it seems im original & sparkin up my own twist on haiku.

thank you for the comment and grade- need it since ive only just started doin these, and I just know 575- say something clever/reflective.

its not easy as a street poet. ;/




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