Other № 68302
An Angel from Venice Disappears
me mouse points, clicks
keyboard comment and fingers speak
pondering and reading angel poems
when the winged european escaped my eyes
called back her writings, and left me to discover
that she has left rankerville in a flash
why? is it so hard to face challenges
opposing views, satire and frank expressions
of poetic opinion?
I thought she had more spine
and wing strength
ah.. some just dont have the brass
and gorilla spirit to tolerate
the jungle of sharp teeth
and harsh roarings.
she wasnt too bad either..
tsk.
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im not sure how -original- this is.. but ok.
-note to self: why is p&k suddenly commenting on my stuff? -shrug- oh well, i needed something out of the ordinary these days..--
At least I know your better than that.
But yesterday someone has zerobombed almost all of my poetry under SD- some which I was very proud of, or had high averages, like Aluminum Xena, Memoirs of a Monk, and Padres Gumbo.
I usually don't care who gives the occassional anon zero- but in this case I do, simply to know and perhaps get a clue as to why they zerobombed me.
I'm sure not anything close to a "mature" poet- I've done plenty of wild stunts. But zerobombing a persons entire archive? Never. I'm a roguish jester poet- not a pathetic one. Wouldn't even do it to the person that zerobombs me.
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