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Islands Of Our King (Free verse) by Caducus
As absent leaders played God at chess
Pawns became Kings and Knights
Who dwelled in narrow moats
Where they drowned in their own blood,
Forming pale islands of the Commonwealth
Slaughtered by the silk glove of skin
By our own Kings hand.
Let me name these islands, these Kings
Cyril of 5 Priory Road in Kent,
Nathan of Ontario,
Darren of a farm near Adelaide,
All islands in a velvet vermillion sea
Floating like bread in bloody broth.
Who will discover these islands?
Which come together like hands in prayer
Each time a new island is born from death.
It matters not where we fell
But where we stood.
Our footsteps filling with rain
Our message to the free world
That we wonât stand again.
Let me fall,
With my brothers in the pit of schisms.
Dying for an unknown cause
As an unknown.
I will be resurrected.
Not as a concrete cross on mowed pastures,
Not as a King or pawn
But as the calm that follows storm.
Look in to my eye
Itâs unconquerable, golden and crowns you in light
And upon this drawbridge of rays
You can enter in sleep the Castle of God.
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Posted: November 23, 2003 3:59 AM PST; Last modified: November 23, 2003 4:00 AM PST
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Your guaranteed to return as one form of energy or another. Heard the buzz is quite soothing- but I haven't travelled that far down the NDE highway, yet.. won't be soon, if im lucky.
But castles? -shrug- (Personaly, the bigman should upgrade to an Elysian Hilton.. toiletry in a keep is quite bad- stinks.)