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The lasts of Joe (Free verse) by Freethinker1602 Damn all this
You dont know
How good it felt
When you held me
In your arms
I feel lost now that you are gone
My eyes shut tightly
I try to hide away
It still hurts
I love you
jmv
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Posted: November 8, 2003 8:40 AM PST; Last modified: November 19, 2003 7:39 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0596013 Overall Rank: 6709 Comments:
Hide? Grow nut hair and give her a kiss already.
Blessed with 4.
how is it that you can put on seven poems in a row and everyone else can only put three on a week?
Satan & his ilk has special pass u know:o)
i love u 2 man:o)
This is desperate frustration pleasantly and simply delivered - I'm tempted to not like that it might be *too* simple - but it works. how in god's name did you put seven poems up? -8-
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