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The lasts of Joe (Free verse) by Freethinker1602

Damn all this You dont know How good it felt When you held me In your arms I feel lost now that you are gone My eyes shut tightly I try to hide away It still hurts I love you jmv

Shuushin 20-Nov-03/8:57 AM
This is desperate frustration pleasantly and simply delivered - I'm tempted to not like that it might be *too* simple - but it works. how in god's name did you put seven poems up? -8-




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