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a goodbye fish (Free verse) by calliope
You paint my shoe a bright bright blue. I kick it through the glass. Must get to you. I smash into aquariums. I dive into terrariums from far above. Your necklace-green, My shoe-your love. And like that shoe you smash right through a haunted overpass.

Up the ladder: Country Song
Down the ladder: The Chaos

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6781
Posted: March 23, 2006 10:15 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2006 10:15 PM PST
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