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a goodbye fish (Free verse) by calliope
You paint my shoe
a bright bright blue.
I kick it through the glass.
Must get to you. I
smash into
aquariums.
I dive into
terrariums from
far above.
Your necklace-green,
My shoe-your love.
And like that shoe
you smash right through
a haunted overpass.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.0596013
Overall Rank: 6792
Posted: March 23, 2006 10:15 PM PST; Last modified: March 23, 2006 10:15 PM PST
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