Ah, another thing: I will need to remodel most of the entire poem in some fashion to turn it into a sonnet- i aways end up doing such a make-over when i engage a poems rebirth.

why would i give you shit? I don't suddenly evolve a complex when someone mentions metrification.. oki doki?

But i do have to inform you that i was not trying to be iambic or dissyllabic- aba ended with bb rhyme scheme was all i was being mindful of, having no thought about meter.

Yes, im a streetpoet- its why my other names include Y2kSlamPoet.. but i do know what meter is. ;)

Do you support censoring art? Do you kiss Mrs. Poetry with that mouth? (Holy Pen Protect Us- from the spread your PC zealot surmons, may art not become diluted)

There! Think me to be your complete opposite, and start praying you never meet the darkside of your mind- much too dreadful for you.

And trust me, theres worse things than MOTHERFUCKING FUCKLINGS!!!

A couple cultures, atleast 2-3 i think, not sure since i really dont think about from where i grab some of the ingredients injected into my blender brew befor pushing the frappe button.

borrowed tidbits along with my imaginative add ons and twists- im pretty good at it.. should see me at work with bible interpretation, its a heretics wetdream. ;)

I might make a sonnet version- I get annoyed with molds though- having to add more than what I'm aiming for, etc, but I'm seriously contemplating doing what you suggest- thought up some ideas when was writing this version already.

Well, im not crazy for yoderian usage myself- but sometimes it comes in handy and fits my mood.

The last line was an itch i had to scratch, ending at morn irritated me for some reason. -shrug-

Let me help you comprehend what i meant by PERSONAL writes, since you seem to be too slow to catch my drift:

I don't wish to discuss my posts concerning childhood memories of my mother/father with you- you can bother me with your inane slandering on my other poetry to your hearts desire. Simply put, I don't want to debate about whether my memories are "guff" or not, specially since you commented such just to prey on a touchy post of mine.

Oh, and repeatedly saying im stupid and a failure will never have the effect your aiming for darkie- nor will it make such comments fact. Your Monumentally Obsessed, over me.. and was it not you who boasted about me becoming to emotionaly captured over yourself? Its amazing how things actually turn out.





And I've done MUCH more than just ramble on with you over the little arguements you bring up- your not the center of my poemranker universe.

No- I've been informed by the legion of dunces that you happen to have that title. It was stated in a letter complaining about my purported membership and rank, threatening to discredit my status of dunce and all that.. which really amused me, its odd for idiots be so formal and... well, polite in such a pointless letter.

Toodles

the quotes are because my Psychic Tophet post is REALLY FUCKING LONG - more of a story than a poem.. though its written in poetic verse, and goes into some detail about my childhood experience with my mother.

Rose tears just happens to be the one of my few good memories of her- visiting her in belgium after having not spoken to her in 3 years after my father divorced her. I figured she deserved to have one of the few good moments posted- since everything else I've written concerning her isnt at all flattering.

clerical you mean?

Ah, claimed? I thought I lied, or thats what you said.

Btw, I have a certificate myself- somewhere in the garbage heap that I call a duplex. It seems that you believe yourself able to read my thoughts and even detect lies! Ofcourse, you've only used your lie detector when the subject has to do with IQ.

Oh, and you also reveal my thoughts magically when you want to dictate what I think. Quite impressive, but my Super Bullshit Detector says you really smell, and it left a side-note saying it also thinks your very sensitive about your IQ Rating compared to mine. You even had to deflect me from mentioning it, even though you do more commenting concerning intelligence than I do-

And if I remember correctly darkie, YOU WERE THE ONE WHO BROUGHT "IQ"'s UP IN THE FIRST PLACE. Which happens to be why I bothered to mention my IQ, along with my usual comic poke.

-Have A Nice Day.

Only on halloween and family reunions.

you worry too much friend, our ancestors survived the birth of christianity, societies moral gestapo, and much more- a few souls knowing of our tribes birthing ritual shant harm us.