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Sorry (Other) by tori Its been awhile since you left,
But there's something I just can't get,
If I did nothing wrong, like everyone says,
Then why do I feel such regret?
The countless fights, anger, tears,
Replay in my mind until I cry,
And I plead with God to forgive me,
For not saying I was sorry before you died,
Its not that I regret, the way that I felt,
For I still believe I was right,
I just wish I'd said sorry for everything,
And I'll always love you, Dad, with all my might.
Up the ladder:
My Day Off
Down the ladder:
Too Late
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Posted: November 6, 2003 5:20 PM PST; Last modified: November 6, 2003 5:20 PM PSTWeighted score: 6.4098988 Overall Rank: 756 Comments:
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sliver @ 63.189.16.35
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6-Nov-03/5:52 PM
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Yea, I just lost my dad in May, But I was able to be there with him, and I think we were o.k. I still wish it hadn't been so sudden, there were alot of things left unsaid.
A difficult road - and a very nice expression of it.
oi.. my evil powers are really suffering today, and now i feel an urge to add to the dad poems. I'll survive though, and heres a seven.
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