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Awefucked by a Shushin Shitzu (freefuck) (Other) by <{Baba^Yaga}>
I am fucking struck by deep fucking convictions - Fucking intrigued by fucking souls with a single mother fucking purpose; obsessive, but fucking effective, addictions, fuck. Fucking Stunned as if fucking punched On the fucking bridge of my mother fucking nose; Fucking forefinger thrust through one fucking eye, She-it in the other, a fucking thumb. Fucking wrenched fuckin toward their awareness, they fucking spit into my ear? Motherfuckers?! “See, this is how it’s fuckin done.” It’s fucking almost too much fucking for me. They fucking burn themselves so fuckin brightly; their fuckin light can be seen for a hundred motherfuckin years & yeah, that's a lot of fuckin years. For you'se that don't fucking know. I saw it first in Fucking Nietzsche, then in when and if I was fucking Van Gogh. All fucked wick, and no fucked candle - more like a fucked fusion of uninspiring butterflys fucking off dead into my window, fuck; as if inspired by a mother fucking shackled, and fuck tortured fuck tortured fuck dipped burnt fuck dipped muse.? Must everything fucking else fuck? be fuckin starved to feed this deformed, fuck, but beautiful, fucking undergrowth? Fuck no. DIRTY POO! And filthy manured fucking fuck mouths. Did I mention wickless and no fuse? I fucking hope so. Motherfuckers. You knew he would either go fucking mad, or fucking surpass you all. But you should have known he'd do both. And turn into the FUCKLING? Flee! Flee! Flee the Fuckling! lol. Just fucking around. Maybe.

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.642857
Weighted score: 6.9320836
Overall Rank: 189
Posted: November 7, 2003 8:24 PM PST; Last modified: November 7, 2003 8:24 PM PST
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[5] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 7-Nov-03/9:01 PM | Reply
I am honored, truly honored.

[wipes eye, ass; flushes]
[n/a] horus8 @ 24.126.116.54 > Shuushin | 8-Nov-03/6:57 PM | Reply
You would be honored if a piece of toast gummed itself to death with a newpaper and coffee; you fucking semi colon; toting colon.
[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.173.116 | 7-Nov-03/10:29 PM | Reply
Fuckling- neato. Overall: very bacchanal.

Blessed with 8.
[7] ShaNoN+960317485 @ 199.40.206.3 | 8-Nov-03/2:56 AM | Reply
Fr the love of the lord...what in gods name is this.. A fucking what...
[5] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 > ShaNoN+960317485 | 8-Nov-03/5:30 AM | Reply
He's making fun of my previous poem.
[n/a] fair12 @ 209.109.243.122 | 8-Nov-03/6:11 AM | Reply
Do you kiss your mother - your grandmother - or (lord protect us - from your procreation) your children with that mouth?
[8] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.165.174 > fair12 | 8-Nov-03/6:54 AM | Reply
Do you support censoring art? Do you kiss Mrs. Poetry with that mouth? (Holy Pen Protect Us- from the spread your PC zealot surmons, may art not become diluted)

There! Think me to be your complete opposite, and start praying you never meet the darkside of your mind- much too dreadful for you.

And trust me, theres worse things than MOTHERFUCKING FUCKLINGS!!!
[5] Shuushin @ 207.5.211.177 | 8-Nov-03/9:10 PM | Reply
With the exception of all the fucks, and fuckings, and maybe's (the boy never can commit, can he) - this thing is really brilliant.
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