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take me home (Free verse) by New Life Drug
Take me home to the ocean where I belong I've been drowning in this sea Looking for the lighthouse by the beach I am just a young girl but not inside Because I see the world set on fire on the horizon every night I can't believe how deep the water's gotten lately Take me back to the ocean where I belong The sight alone just like a wave it swallows me I've been coming back for air but somehow I can't breathe I am just a vagrant girl but not inside Because I see myself at home just circling the ocean wide I can't believe how deep the water's gotten lately


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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5761
Posted: November 8, 2003 10:31 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2003 10:31 PM PST
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[7] SupremeDreamer @ 204.31.160.203 | 8-Nov-03/11:09 PM | Reply
You know what that means?

Gills are next on your "need to get" list. Blessed with seven- btw, you mix well with my meth injection.
[10] sliver @ 63.190.72.255 | 9-Nov-03/11:26 AM | Reply
It's just gonna get deeper. Good poem, I enjoyed it.
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