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My Obsession (Free verse) by nicole081083
You're in my thoughts, you're in my head You're in my dreams while I'm lying in bed I see you whenever I close my eyes When I'm not with you I wish time would fly by But when I'm with you I wish time would stand still And I wish you felt the same way that I feel And then again I wish these feelings would go away Because I know you could never see me that way We are too good of friends, like you've said before How could I even think we could ever be more?

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5811
Posted: January 14, 2004 2:37 PM PST; Last modified: January 14, 2004 2:37 PM PST
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