Free verse № 79711
Tide Pool
A stone was in my path, flecked
with sea gold, with wave-rounded
corners, with
unexplainable smooth holes
channelling through the heart of it,
speckled with tiny black and purple living shells.
It was that
which I stopped to examine,
squatting on my heels
'till the shadow of the rock
lengthened to the edge of the waves,
trying to puzzle out a meaning in the movement
of the tiny purple-legged crabs
living in the lee of the rock,
in the waving slow tentacles
of the fleshy thing in the deep part
of the pool: waving, still, waving, still
anemone, anemone
anemone,
Laughing at the lazy clown-faced
fish hovering in the midst of the fleshy arms
like some kind of sex,
'till the shadows vanished in a general
darkness, and I stayed there still,
listening to the sea
which had come up to the pool
and the rock, once
and gone back again while I lingered.
And while I waited there
an odd man in overalls
came by with a bucket and shone
a strange dim light (purple!) past my back
and the pool
and the rock exploded
in cold neon fire, purple, intense blue-white
and cold, cold neon orange, a dozen times
more moving things than I
had ever noticed all day in the sun.
The man moved on with his light,
I saw him place some slowly-kicking
glowing thing into that bucket of darkness
and finally I rose and wandered home.
16 comments
The pome is intended as a metaphor about the interaction between big-R Romantic & RatMat, or Science. Note it's ambivalent & doesn't claim either mode is intrinsically better than the other. So it's a thing to the Romantic narrator, he hasn't the nomenclature the collector likely has.
You're right about 'till though. Silly affectation. I will change it.
"you shouldn't have used the word thing"
comes a voice from th' ecliptical ring
but varmint & critter
don't hardly seem fitter
lest I too far to the plebian swing.
(nor for that do darkangel and horus...)
when the choir - though patrician -
leaves some of us wishin'
that one of them owned a thesaurus.
(I'd have done better, but my spondee's rusty.)
I'm left with a dark apprehension
I will keep to bright paths
(and stay away from the baths)
So we don't risk any further accension.
That it leaves me quite frankly suspicious
that you think something's wrong
with both my song & my dong
But I assure you my "thing" is delicious
(Though your manner, as always, is heinous)
But here I should mention
I just don't have the penchant
And you don't know a "thing" from your anus
I'll allow you to maintain your repression
But no-one is fooled
Because how well you tooled
Your replies constitutes a confession
- give me one more reply and I'll hustle -
but if 'thing' has some gist
(a la Freud) that I've missed,
You could still call it cod, eel, or mussel.
And it's swell to find one who's a peer to me
To wrap up this round
I'll concede your crit sound
Though I doubt your advice will adhere to me
Well I see that this "thing"'s got you livid
And you're sure I should be much more vivid
But too long with thesaurus
Tends to frustrate and bore us
If you know which word's best than just give it.
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