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take me home (Free verse) by New Life Drug

Take me home to the ocean where I belong I've been drowning in this sea Looking for the lighthouse by the beach I am just a young girl but not inside Because I see the world set on fire on the horizon every night I can't believe how deep the water's gotten lately Take me back to the ocean where I belong The sight alone just like a wave it swallows me I've been coming back for air but somehow I can't breathe I am just a vagrant girl but not inside Because I see myself at home just circling the ocean wide I can't believe how deep the water's gotten lately

sliver 9-Nov-03/11:26 AM
It's just gonna get deeper. Good poem, I enjoyed it.




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