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Whispering (Zero Atmosphere) (Free verse) by Y2kSlamPoet
Thrice the universe turned in my sleep
cupped his hands-- dipped into me
and drank deep.
The mushroom that is my brain
discovered hallucination- shroom mentor arrived
teaching it to spread spores by casting it
into gods breath, it was then that he
whispered to me:
Created within my image;
fallen child, set yourself free.
Take what is yours, break the vines
that imprison you, and remember this:
This voice is just an echo;
Believe not in me- the almighty-
a frail voice of desperate revelations.
Believe in you and no other;
consider still the utterings
of those close at heart
and follow your navigation
with confidence.
Startling it was- this faint memory
of life before oxygen
uncovered by poets pen.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.5
Weighted score: 5.134471
Overall Rank: 5531
Posted: October 8, 2003 2:28 PM PDT; Last modified: October 8, 2003 2:28 PM PDT
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