| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
29-May-03/8:54 PM |
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what? please im glad this isnt longer
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
29-May-03/8:52 PM |
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ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
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| Re: The black scary night by jauser |
25-May-03/5:55 PM |
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Did u get jumped or somthin recently?
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| Re: a comment on My girl by simone_girard |
25-May-03/5:44 PM |
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For once i agree with u poetry.com is the biggest scam i ever seen in my life. They will publish any thing im thinkin about sendin them a word and see if they would publish it. And like i said before sonnets are supposed to rhyme every other line
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| Re: Love by simone_girard |
25-May-03/5:39 PM |
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Isnt a sonnet supposed to rhyme every other line
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| Re: My Reason For Love by Miggy |
24-May-03/6:14 PM |
The word love should not be used by someone who is only 14
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
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| Re: Vivid Anger by DeadtotheWorld |
24-May-03/6:07 PM |
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
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| Re: Too Dead to Live by DeadtotheWorld |
24-May-03/6:05 PM |
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
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| Re: masquerade by lil cindy lu who |
24-May-03/5:59 PM |
we all wear masks to hide wht we are
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
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| Re: Anouk by daniella |
24-May-03/5:48 PM |
THt is so sweet
makes me want to have a child someday
Have to find the right gurl i guess
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| Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi |
24-May-03/5:46 PM |
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| Re: she said by Bill Z Bub |
24-May-03/5:44 PM |
nice
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
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| Re: flight (a poem written in high school) by Bill Z Bub |
24-May-03/5:41 PM |
thts real good man but not as good as ur others
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
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| Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
24-May-03/5:39 PM |
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Dude give up tht sucked i couldnt even finish readin it
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| Re: Awakened by temptalia |
24-May-03/5:32 PM |
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i can relate this world can be quite much for one to handle sometimes
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| Re: W.A.R. by lunar |
24-May-03/4:59 PM |
Guess it was a miss
and so was this
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| Re: I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom |
24-May-03/4:57 PM |
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| Re: Warmth by shwenatjadeflower |
22-May-03/2:53 PM |
I like how u repeat setain lines its a sttyle i like to use also
Not Bad
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| Re: ALONE by NewbieMe |
22-May-03/2:50 PM |
Well i have to say this is good i have a poem by the same title
keep writin it suits u
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| Re: Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT |
21-May-03/3:51 PM |
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thts good u seriously have too much power behind tht truck
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