on My Friend? by Blade
29 May 2003, 8:54 PM
what? please im glad this isnt longer
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
29 May 2003, 8:52 PM
ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
on The black scary night by jauser
25 May 2003, 5:55 PM
Did u get jumped or somthin recently?
replying on My girl by simone_girard
25 May 2003, 5:44 PM
For once i agree with u poetry.com is the biggest scam i ever seen in my life. They will publish any thing im thinkin about sendin them a word and see if they would publish it. And like i said before sonnets are supposed to rhyme every other line
on Love by simone_girard
25 May 2003, 5:39 PM
Isnt a sonnet supposed to rhyme every other line
on My Reason For Love by Miggy
24 May 2003, 6:14 PM
The word love should not be used by someone who is only 14
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
on Vivid Anger by DeadtotheWorld
24 May 2003, 6:07 PM
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
on Too Dead to Live by DeadtotheWorld
24 May 2003, 6:05 PM
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
on masquerade by lil cindy lu who
24 May 2003, 5:59 PM
we all wear masks to hide wht we are
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
on great caesar's ghost by bondjedi
24 May 2003, 5:46 PM
wht?
on she said by Bill Z Bub
24 May 2003, 5:44 PM
nice
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
on flight (a poem written in high school) by Bill Z Bub
24 May 2003, 5:41 PM
thts real good man but not as good as ur others
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
on Theology by dougsoderstrom
24 May 2003, 5:39 PM
Dude give up tht sucked i couldnt even finish readin it
on I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom
24 May 2003, 4:57 PM
Sweeet
on Warmth by shwenatjadeflower
22 May 2003, 2:53 PM
I like how u repeat setain lines its a sttyle i like to use also
Not Bad
Not Bad
on Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT
21 May 2003, 3:51 PM
thts good u seriously have too much power behind tht truck