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Free verse № 48715

Vivid Anger

Member since 2003 · Posted 7 May 2003 · 3 comments

So many problems in this world today I get more cuts and bruises everyday I’m crazy, sick and twisted, you just can’t Mess with this, Hell man, when you get right Down to it I’m ballistic, found, bound Within my rights, I put on my gloves and let’s Get on with this fight, don’t back away, and cuss Today’s that day I unleash my rage, my angry So vivid the earth trembles, it shakes and it quakes

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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8-May-03/1:25 AM Reply
I'M ABOUT TO <BR>
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 9-May-03/6:50 AM Reply
So many problems in this world today
I get more cuts and bruises everyday
I’m crazy, sick and twisted, you just can’t
Mess with this, Hell man, when you get right
Down to it I’m ballistic, found, bound
Within my rights, I put on my gloves and let’s
Get on with this fight, don’t back away, and cuss
Today’s that day I unleash my rage, my anger
So vivid the earth trembles, it shakes and it quakes
But first, I really ought to finish ironing these napkins.
[2] Felzpoet 24-May-03/6:07 PM Reply
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem