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I must be out of my mind (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
Lately I have found That when I’m down You kick me in balls If I’m high you drag me to the ground Beat me till my face stops making that cracking sound Then drag my corpse through the halls Its moments like these Tied to a flag pole with my pants at my knees That I wish I were gay Cause then I wouldn’t end up swaying in the breeze Screaming could you help me down please All because your lips hold me in your sway I wouldn’t be locked in my locker Cause you heard me say that yeah I’d fuck her It wouldn’t have been so bad if it wasn’t after the dance My friends say that I ought to end it and I concur But its hard when I can’t even talk with her Its either pain or pleasure, slap or take off your pants Its all because of that damn sex appeal Can’t seem to say it, yea... whats the deal? I know its wrong but what can I say I can’t resist the way her body feels So what? The burns and scars will heal I still bet I’m getting more than you anyday

Up the ladder: blue lilac and I (edit)
Down the ladder: The Garden Island

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Arithmetic Mean: 8.666667
Weighted score: 6.8333335
Overall Rank: 409
Posted: May 9, 2003 11:32 PM PDT; Last modified: June 22, 2004 11:12 AM PDT
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[1] lunar @ | 10-May-03/5:55 AM | Reply
Haha yeah
[n/a] richa @ | 10-May-03/10:05 AM | Reply
this is ok
gently amusing without recourse to the usual 'funny' issues written about on here
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ > richa | 22-Jun-04/11:20 AM | Reply
One thing I really like about you richa is your great sense of humour. Keep it up! -10-
[n/a] richa @ > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 22-Jun-04/11:34 AM | Reply
ace, you have had over a year to think up that reply. -m10m-
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ > richa | 22-Jun-04/11:42 AM | Reply
Do you mean to suggest I'm some sort of idiot?
[6] Felzpoet @ | 24-May-03/4:57 PM | Reply
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