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The black scary night (Free verse) by jauser
Night is a black hole dark and unexplored the night is scary and cold you won't know what's on the other side of the door The night is a good time for the bad to come out they will hurt you for as much... ... as a dime You will try fighting back and even shout but you still can't get out so the next time when you go out, think about what will happen in the night remember about your will be harm life AND BRING A DAMN KNIFE

Down the ladder: him

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.4
Weighted score: 4.7
Overall Rank: 12018
Posted: May 25, 2003 5:49 PM PDT; Last modified: May 25, 2003 5:49 PM PDT
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[4] Felzpoet @ 68.173.204.214 | 25-May-03/5:55 PM | Reply
Did u get jumped or somthin recently?
[n/a] jauser @ 64.169.232.60 > Felzpoet | 27-May-03/3:45 PM | Reply
haha, no
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 26-May-03/6:19 AM | Reply
I was disappointed that the scariest thing you could think of was a mugger. Oh, a mugger, that's going to keep me up at night shitting my keks.
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