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him (Free verse) by akriti_mehta
He makes me feel cared about,
He makes me feel loved.
He makes me feel everything,
I've ever wanted to feel.
But somehow I just keep
running away from all his love,
His love sinks to the bottom,
My fear rises above.
My fear of having him,
and then losing him one fall.
Coz u see, not only is he my love,
but my best friend , my all.
So I am afraid to love him, now or ever,
Because i am so sure , whatever we might have,
will one day surely sever.
But i just cant get him out of my mind,
no matter how much i strive,
Maybe its time for me to discern,
He has become a part of my life.
So I hate all of him,
just for one sole reason,
I cannot not love him,
any day of any season.
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.875
Weighted score: 4.697441
Overall Rank: 12024
Posted: July 7, 2002 1:19 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2002 6:45 AM PDT
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