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invisible field (Free verse) by cinnobunny
my kisses fall just as the snowflakes fall, blanketing the field of your heart, invisible now are the things beneath, till even i ask, "what will grow there come spring?" what will grow from the invisible man?

Up the ladder: him
Down the ladder: Cadbury Avenue

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.875
Weighted score: 4.697441
Overall Rank: 12024
Posted: July 9, 2002 8:07 PM PDT; Last modified: July 9, 2002 8:07 PM PDT
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