poemranker ::invisible field by cinnobunny

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Free verse № 3703

invisible field

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jul 2002 · 0 comments

my kisses fall just as the snowflakes fall, blanketing the field of your heart, invisible now are the things beneath, till even i ask, "what will grow there come spring?" what will grow from the invisible man?

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