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Cadbury Avenue (Ode) by Takay Shitar
I leave white stains wherever i sit, Brown sheriffs badge,now red raw oh, how my bum's full of white shit, my arse is so sore. Dedicated to Gareth Cheeseman and all those like him

Up the ladder: invisible field
Down the ladder: Don't Think Of Me

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.875
Weighted score: 4.697441
Overall Rank: 12021
Posted: July 30, 2002 4:18 AM PDT; Last modified: July 30, 2002 4:18 AM PDT
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[9] Art Glocken @ 143.52.4.68 | 30-Jul-02/5:21 AM | Reply
this seems to be inspired by 7 horsemen and the light that shines from there fine scribes.
[2] nentwined @ 192.168.0.69 | 11-Sep-02/12:47 PM | Reply
ehh?
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