| Re: Theology by dougsoderstrom |
24-May-03/5:39 PM |
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Dude give up tht sucked i couldnt even finish readin it
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| Re: flight (a poem written in high school) by Bill Z Bub |
24-May-03/5:41 PM |
thts real good man but not as good as ur others
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
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| Re: she said by Bill Z Bub |
24-May-03/5:44 PM |
nice
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
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| Re: great caesar's ghost by bondjedi |
24-May-03/5:46 PM |
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| Re: Anouk by daniella |
24-May-03/5:48 PM |
THt is so sweet
makes me want to have a child someday
Have to find the right gurl i guess
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24-May-03/5:49 PM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
24-May-03/5:50 PM |
Sounds like lyrics from Taproot
good poem very touching
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| Re: masquerade by lil cindy lu who |
24-May-03/5:59 PM |
we all wear masks to hide wht we are
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
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| Re: Too Dead to Live by DeadtotheWorld |
24-May-03/6:05 PM |
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
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| Re: Vivid Anger by DeadtotheWorld |
24-May-03/6:07 PM |
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
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| Re: My Reason For Love by Miggy |
24-May-03/6:14 PM |
The word love should not be used by someone who is only 14
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
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| Re: Love by simone_girard |
25-May-03/5:39 PM |
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Isnt a sonnet supposed to rhyme every other line
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| Re: The black scary night by jauser |
25-May-03/5:55 PM |
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Did u get jumped or somthin recently?
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25-May-03/5:58 PM |
HA now tht is funny
good effort
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
29-May-03/12:50 PM |
Nah i just think tht the rest of u have no lives
all u do is sit there with ur computers ragin on other ppls shit. when a poem is written it should only be left to interpretation not riddicule because how can u riddicule someones feelings. Before u talk u should get a life beyond a computer.
NIce GUrl dont listen to these overcritical panzy asses cause they wouldnt know an emotion if it kicked them upside the head
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| Re: Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
29-May-03/8:52 PM |
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ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
29-May-03/8:54 PM |
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what? please im glad this isnt longer
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31-May-03/10:18 AM |
Damn gurl
well in not gonna let u do tht so nah
well written though specially considerin u were 10
Damn u r a little screwed up
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1-Jun-03/6:54 PM |
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Damn ur just as good as ur daughter. a little lighter of a mood but just as good. Our emotions show in our writting u express them very well
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3-Jun-03/11:33 AM |
Hey journey know how u feel id get off too but it really doent effect me much and Tek u better send me poems thn cause i like readin them good luck to the both of u wit ur writing
-MikE
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