on My Friend? by Blade
29 May 2003, 8:54 PM
what? please im glad this isnt longer
on Theology by dougsoderstrom
24 May 2003, 5:39 PM
Dude give up tht sucked i couldnt even finish readin it
on some deleted poem
3 Jun 2003, 11:33 AM
Hey journey know how u feel id get off too but it really doent effect me much and Tek u better send me poems thn cause i like readin them good luck to the both of u wit ur writing
-MikE
-MikE
on some deleted poem
1 Jun 2003, 6:54 PM
Damn ur just as good as ur daughter. a little lighter of a mood but just as good. Our emotions show in our writting u express them very well
on some deleted poem
31 May 2003, 10:18 AM
Damn gurl
well in not gonna let u do tht so nah
well written though specially considerin u were 10
Damn u r a little screwed up
well in not gonna let u do tht so nah
well written though specially considerin u were 10
Damn u r a little screwed up
on Beggar's Indulgence by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
29 May 2003, 8:52 PM
ma nu sure do like writtin bout dissease of the world dont u
on some deleted poem
29 May 2003, 12:50 PM
Nah i just think tht the rest of u have no lives
all u do is sit there with ur computers ragin on other ppls shit. when a poem is written it should only be left to interpretation not riddicule because how can u riddicule someones feelings. Before u talk u should get a life beyond a computer.
NIce GUrl dont listen to these overcritical panzy asses cause they wouldnt know an emotion if it kicked them upside the head
all u do is sit there with ur computers ragin on other ppls shit. when a poem is written it should only be left to interpretation not riddicule because how can u riddicule someones feelings. Before u talk u should get a life beyond a computer.
NIce GUrl dont listen to these overcritical panzy asses cause they wouldnt know an emotion if it kicked them upside the head
on she said by Bill Z Bub
24 May 2003, 5:44 PM
nice
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
on great caesar's ghost by bondjedi
24 May 2003, 5:46 PM
wht?
on some deleted poem
24 May 2003, 5:49 PM
Pointless
on some deleted poem
24 May 2003, 5:50 PM
Sounds like lyrics from Taproot
good poem very touching
good poem very touching
on masquerade by lil cindy lu who
24 May 2003, 5:59 PM
we all wear masks to hide wht we are
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
on Too Dead to Live by DeadtotheWorld
24 May 2003, 6:05 PM
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
on Vivid Anger by DeadtotheWorld
24 May 2003, 6:07 PM
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
on My Reason For Love by Miggy
24 May 2003, 6:14 PM
The word love should not be used by someone who is only 14
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
on flight (a poem written in high school) by Bill Z Bub
24 May 2003, 5:41 PM
thts real good man but not as good as ur others
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
on some deleted poem
25 May 2003, 5:58 PM
HA now tht is funny
good effort
good effort
on The black scary night by jauser
25 May 2003, 5:55 PM
Did u get jumped or somthin recently?
on Love by simone_girard
25 May 2003, 5:39 PM
Isnt a sonnet supposed to rhyme every other line