Re: arise by daniella	18-May-03/6:17 PM
Great poem really touching
regarding some deleted poem...	21-May-03/3:11 PM
good poem pay no attention to the quetios they must not know tht poems mean somthin different to different ppl and arent meant to be explained
Re: missing time by Bill Z Bub	21-May-03/3:15 PM
wow tht really is good i guess i have to listen when u give me advise now great poem again now i see wut u mean by sayin u know how i felt
regarding some deleted poem...	21-May-03/3:25 PM
not to be nosey but did it work any way it was good reminds me of the person i wrote most of mine about Hey since u write songs maybe u could help me come up with a chorus for Let Me Breathe nice song
Re: All A Mistake by Alyssa91	21-May-03/3:30 PM
wow thts really emotional cant even describe i am truly impressed
Re: I'm reserved by Alyssa91	21-May-03/3:32 PM
I know how u feel, not much here but gets the point across good job
Re: Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus	21-May-03/3:44 PM
Dude tht is so wrong but funny
Re: Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT	21-May-03/3:51 PM
thts good u seriously have too much power behind tht truck
regarding some deleted poem...	22-May-03/2:43 PM
I definately know how u feel when the person u fall in love with doesnt feel the same it really hurts. And they never understand y u cant let them go Great Poem
regarding some deleted poem...	22-May-03/2:47 PM
wow alot of emotion and again i can relate i guess thts y ppl like us write to express wut we wish we could say Straight from the heart rite to the Pen
Re: ALONE by NewbieMe	22-May-03/2:50 PM
Well i have to say this is good i have a poem by the same title keep writin it suits u
Re: Warmth by shwenatjadeflower	22-May-03/2:53 PM
I like how u repeat setain lines its a sttyle i like to use also Not Bad
regarding some deleted poem...	24-May-03/3:19 PM
Dark Dreary and depressin I like It
regarding some deleted poem...	24-May-03/3:22 PM
I Agree But I think tht when it comes to this world nobody really understands y things happen the way thy do
regarding some deleted poem...	24-May-03/3:26 PM
Scuiside is for Pussys who cant deal with their own problems Scuiside is the biggest form of cowadace
regarding some deleted poem...	24-May-03/4:55 PM
great work would make a good song very touching and obviously has alot of meaning
Re: I must be out of my mind by thepinkbunnyofdoom	24-May-03/4:57 PM
Sweeet
Re: W.A.R. by lunar	24-May-03/4:59 PM
Guess it was a miss and so was this
regarding some deleted poem...	24-May-03/5:10 PM
Like talkin to urself do ya yeah we,, me to but dont make poems out of it
Re: Awakened by temptalia	24-May-03/5:32 PM
i can relate this world can be quite much for one to handle sometimes