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I'm reserved (Free verse) by Alyssa91 I'm reserved for the better or the worst?
I'm reserved for the unwanted and cursed?
I'm reserved for the ugly and pretty?
I'm reserved for the one with pity?
Why I ask must you reserve me for all
when all I have wanted was to give you my sprawl,
of enthusiasm and all of the above
when now all i want is to be loved.
Up the ladder:
STAR WARS
Down the ladder:
B-Movie Video Voiceover Guy
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Posted: May 20, 2003 7:27 PM PDT; Last modified: May 20, 2003 7:27 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.7310586 Overall Rank: 11829 Comments:
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Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232
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20-May-03/7:47 PM
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yeah?
I think it should be Am I reserved....Not bad though (7)
You must unlearn what you have learned.
I know how u feel, not much here but gets the point across good job
I tried to give someone my sprawl once but they just flew upset and started shouting. And as I dangled there uselessly from the secret hole I'd made in the ceiling, my naked body sprawled and vulnerable, clumsily suspended above the mattress like some sort of filthy arachnid, I thought to myself "O Jesu what have I done..."
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