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Warmth (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower
A moment of panic grips me A tight grasp forbids me to move The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear I am warm here. Sunlight glows through strands of your golden hair Framing your body and face Like an aura, making everything clear The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear I have all but forgotten the sun A light much brighter shines from within your eyes Stained glass blue that's clear I am warm here. Your eyes are a vague hue Through a cloud of feeling as we kiss And you envelop me further, dissolving my fear Like and aura, making everything clear.

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3624
Posted: May 21, 2003 7:41 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 7:41 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] INTRANSIT @ 152.163.252.72 | 21-May-03/7:45 PM | Reply
Were you attempting a villanelle?
[8] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 > INTRANSIT | 21-May-03/8:28 PM | Reply
She was attempting a full gainor Sir Cooredrectum.
[8] Roisin @ 149.170.39.36 | 22-May-03/10:54 AM | Reply
Really beautiful-nice one 8
[6] Felzpoet @ 68.173.204.214 | 22-May-03/2:53 PM | Reply
I like how u repeat setain lines its a sttyle i like to use also
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