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Warmth (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower
A moment of panic grips me
A tight grasp forbids me to move
The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear
I am warm here.
Sunlight glows through strands of your golden hair
Framing your body and face
Like an aura, making everything clear
The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear
I have all but forgotten the sun
A light much brighter shines from within your eyes
Stained glass blue that's clear
I am warm here.
Your eyes are a vague hue
Through a cloud of feeling as we kiss
And you envelop me further, dissolving my fear
Like and aura, making everything clear.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Weighted score: 5.3073616
Overall Rank: 3624
Posted: May 21, 2003 7:41 PM PDT; Last modified: May 21, 2003 7:41 PM PDT
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