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Fit In (Free verse) by A Simple Poet 123 Late, in the Darkness of the night
I sit and cry
Knowing nothing's alright
I feel so useless
Unloved and Unwanted
Oh how i wish
I didn't have to be
Someone who clearly
Isn't me
But someone I
Don't even know
So i just put on a show
I act happy and
So full of joy
But really I'm
Dying inside
Wishing I had
A differant life
Wondering
Does anyone
Actually know who i am
and if they did
would i still fit in?
Up the ladder:
Warmth
Down the ladder:
Caesar and the Giant. (revised)
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 6.142857
Posted: May 26, 2003 6:03 PM PDT; Last modified: May 26, 2003 6:03 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.3073616 Overall Rank: 3625 Comments:
[10]
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215
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26-May-03/6:30 PM
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10
Hmmm... D.A.'s Vote here with a so much as a real word surprises me. Personally I thought this was good but not worthy of 10. I'd say more like an 8. Its good but just a little cliche, don't ask me how it manages not to be.
yeah, no one understands us asl?
HHHHHHHHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEMMMMMMMMMMMM
simple sentiments, but I read some of your cliches and wonder if you really mean them
dying inside is a bit hyperbolous 179 view(s)
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