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Fit In (Free verse) by A Simple Poet 123

Late, in the Darkness of the night I sit and cry Knowing nothing's alright I feel so useless Unloved and Unwanted Oh how i wish I didn't have to be Someone who clearly Isn't me But someone I Don't even know So i just put on a show I act happy and So full of joy But really I'm Dying inside Wishing I had A differant life Wondering Does anyone Actually know who i am and if they did would i still fit in?

thepinkbunnyofdoom 26-May-03/8:59 PM
Hmmm... D.A.'s Vote here with a so much as a real word surprises me. Personally I thought this was good but not worthy of 10. I'd say more like an 8. Its good but just a little cliche, don't ask me how it manages not to be.




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