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Warmth (Free verse) by shwenatjadeflower

A moment of panic grips me A tight grasp forbids me to move The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear I am warm here. Sunlight glows through strands of your golden hair Framing your body and face Like an aura, making everything clear The touch of your soft lips dissolves my fear I have all but forgotten the sun A light much brighter shines from within your eyes Stained glass blue that's clear I am warm here. Your eyes are a vague hue Through a cloud of feeling as we kiss And you envelop me further, dissolving my fear Like and aura, making everything clear.

Felzpoet 22-May-03/2:53 PM
I like how u repeat setain lines its a sttyle i like to use also
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