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Too Dead to Live (Free verse) by DeadtotheWorld Lovely blisters on your fingertips
Defining morals is my innocence
I have nothing to gain or lose
my life is lost and now I choose
to take the pain and the suf-fer-ring
twisted dimension is a simple thang
you cannot see me
Yet, I can see you
My life is meaningless
Because it's black and blue
yes I know the truth, It hurts,
Vomitting blood in dispensful splurts
Maniacs raging all over towns
the clowns no longer have their frowns
the end is near
the end is here
Now your life is dead, your life is nothing
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Posted: May 6, 2003 9:39 PM PDT; Last modified: May 6, 2003 9:39 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.5 Overall Rank: 2705 Comments:
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razorgrin @ 198.164.188.81
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7-May-03/3:15 PM
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"suf-fer-ring"? What the suffer-fuck? Great title, though. Almost, but not quite as good as Motorhead's classic "Killed by Death". However, sir, Lemmy, you are not.0.
Pederasty, pure and simple. Yes, die.
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too 180 view(s)
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