| Re: Few Words by Tom Colebrooke |
14-Oct-02/8:41 AM |
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ask p&k. he's a journalist.
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| Re: a comment on Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/8:40 AM |
vulcan, i have read and re-read this poem, and i do not consider myself a dense person, so i must conclude that:
a) i am not as well-read as you, and you are alluding to something i perhaps should have read, that would be the key to unlock the poem
b) the metaphor is clear in your mind, but has not translated well to the reader at large
c) i am dense
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| Re: a comment on Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/8:29 AM |
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to what end? i don't get it.
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| Re: a comment on Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/8:25 AM |
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v-this poem is fraught with mixed imagery. you mean to make it sorrowful, but the snowman with the swollen nose makes it comical. and, please, check your spelling. a 'sole' and a 'soul' are very different.
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| Re: One Country by poetandknowit |
14-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
'barren in bounty'--'barren, late of bounty'? the birdsong is a beautiful touch, as are the lips and hips and the promise of both. your aim is indeed true.
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| Re: Snow-White by vulcan |
14-Oct-02/8:01 AM |
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my carp could conquer your sole any day. with his fins tied behind his back, even.
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| Re: a comment on quickie by <~> |
14-Oct-02/7:56 AM |
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thanks. it was just a quickie, after all. and sometimes, that's exactly what you need, know what i mean?
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| Re: Football by Tom Colebrooke |
14-Oct-02/7:41 AM |
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only a mere smackerel for me, roo
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| Re: a comment on A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT |
14-Oct-02/7:19 AM |
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you only think i'm nice because you have ignored my comments.
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| Re: a comment on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~> |
14-Oct-02/6:23 AM |
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he had just been to see the bum doctor, you see.
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| Re: a comment on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~> |
13-Oct-02/4:21 PM |
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| Re: Bowstones, 21st June 200 by Nicholas Jones |
11-Oct-02/7:50 AM |
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please do stick with this, and steer clear of politics. you are so fucking good at sense of place.
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| Re: SO by Nicholas Jones |
11-Oct-02/7:48 AM |
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so. surreal. and concrete. and metal and blood and plastic and steam and vision. and haze. thorough.
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| Re: more{Porn*Star}{Hai*kus} by horus8 |
11-Oct-02/7:22 AM |
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you are a naughty boy and you deserve to be spanked. have a 9. you'll have to get the 6 yourself.
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| Re: The Thought Of It by Christof |
10-Oct-02/1:42 PM |
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christof, you are honed razor sharp these days. i bled, reading this.
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| Re: a comment on A Soldier's Promise by Ninoy_Instigator |
10-Oct-02/7:15 AM |
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to me, it seems like you have deemed her incapable of taking care of herself, or of making her own decisions.
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| Re: song of the birds by rainbow |
9-Oct-02/8:36 AM |
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how is this a song of birds? sounds more like a diary entry of a teenage girl who needs to get out and live a little.
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| Re: Haiku by heart |
9-Oct-02/8:32 AM |
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would be better if the first line had more 'rigid cadence'.
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| Re: Snack for the Shameless by New Life Drug |
9-Oct-02/8:28 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Russian Roulette by <~> |
8-Oct-02/7:58 AM |
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i have taken your suggestion ismael. but i think i shall leave the title, so the reader has some clue.
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