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The day I told her (Free verse) by dalva
Nothing could have stopped me from telling her how much she
meant to me.
I knew this was the moment that would truly define our
relationship forever.
Many times I have poured out my soul through written words
to her.
Flowers and roses were mere tokens of appreciation to her
glorious beauty.
There she was... the loveliest woman I have ever seen, the
most enchanting image a man could possibly behold... was
sitting before me.
My heart never beat as strong or as fast than in any other
moment in my life.
As I slowly revealed my intentions to here... she watched
and waited patiently.
Her gaze focused on me intently and her eyes widened as I
struggled to articulate the words.
Then in a sudden burst of courage and chance that only love
could give me... I began to empty my heart.
I held nothing back, my pride, my dignity, and my fear
where no longer an obstacle.
There was nothing more difficult than telling the women I
adored... that I liked her, that I was fond of her, that
she was the most precious soul that I've ever encountered.
After I finished, I so yearned for the women of my dreams
to say she felt the same way, that she too wanted to be
with me.
But just before she responded... her eyes grew dim, the
light that once glowed from her face was covered in
darkness and then with only a few words she cut straight
through my very being where my heart lay unprotected.
The woman who I'd hoped would be my sweetheart; my most
cherished red rose... did not feel the same way.
I pretended to understand and forced a smile... but behind
my face I lay in pieces, shattered, and inconsolable.
As she tried to convince me that I would find another, I
fought back the lump in my throat, the pain in my heart.
Then as we hugged goodbye... at the moment, when I held her
in my arms, when I looked in her eyes, when I was enveloped
in her long hair, as I was consoled by her soft voice... I
knew I would never find anyone else quite like her.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10905
Posted: October 6, 2002 10:07 PM PDT; Last modified: October 6, 2002 10:07 PM PDT
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Well done..!!!!