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Break

Member since 2002 · Posted 25 Oct 2002 · 4 comments

Left alone the tears flow so true Missing him so much Yet nothing I can do. The smile he put on my face Has long since dissapeared. Hatred here is not the case Our friendship will prevail. My love for him will always last Even if this is the end And our relationship stays the past. Our memories will never fade, The future may be unclear But the the past I will not trade. Forever in my eyes he'll be The one true love that I need. I know his happiness is key, So I hope this means one day with me he'll be.

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[0] Tintagiles 26-Oct-02/6:36 PM Reply

I do believe I have stepped onto holy ground. Who could have guessed there were so many angels in the world, and who all wrote poemes? Have these people no imagination, no capability to think of some other name? Or are they merely all so self-aggrandising that they take themselves for things above the human? Pah! And people call me pretentious.

[0] Tintagiles › Tintagiles 26-Oct-02/6:37 PM Reply

Oh, and about the poem: making a silly inersion like 'with me he'll be' does not make it poetry. Especially when the rhyme scheme works without the inversion.

[n/a] angel_uy › Tintagiles 27-Oct-02/11:21 AM Reply

I realize the rhyme scheme works without the inversion, but I liked it better with it, and since I am the writer, I thought I would write what I liked better.

[n/a] angel_uy › Tintagiles 27-Oct-02/11:18 AM Reply

My user name is just that, a name, I use it because me and my best friend started with the nick names evil angel and perfect devil many years ago. There is no other meaning then that behind it. One last thing, this site is about the poetry not the name, so get a life, you take things way to seriously.