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Bowstones, 21st June 200 (Free verse) by Nicholas Jones
On the shortest night of the year
Beneath me I can see Manchester:
The red bricks of my suburb,
The grey stone of the city,
The hospital I was born in.
(though the confusing haze
of heat and car exhausts
ruins the view through my binoculars)
Tired people must be running
Through heat and dirt
To catch buses on dual carriageways
Feeling out of place amid
The darkness, car parks, and light pollution,
But I am far away from that:
Though the city appears still and silent
The Bowstones are truly immovable -
Deformed stone crosses from the past,
Cross-pieces long since missing,
High up in isolated moorland -
They reassure me,
I grow cold and thoughtful
Watching streetlamps switch on.
A few hours ago it was a hot and horrid day
on the crowded five o'clock bus home from work,
packed in with sweating students and commuters.
But now that is over;
Instead I see a field, a hill,
Dry stone wall with a decaying stile.
The sun finally leaves the sky, I shiver.
Binoculars yield nothing but yellow glare,
Vague silhouettes of towerblocks,
Or roads picked out by lights
That shake with my hands.
As streetlights grow brighter,
The city glows,
Predicting darker nights
And wintry cold.
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Posted: October 11, 2002 5:37 AM PDT; Last modified: October 11, 2002 5:37 AM PDT
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