Re: a comment on walk out by NNirvana13666	22-Aug-03/10:46 AM
13666--yeah there's a lot of crap here. just like everywhere. and there's good stuff too. as for yours being good? i'd call it self-servingly nascent.
Re: a comment on fragile by Bill Z Bub	21-Aug-03/8:34 PM
weird. get k on it. although he ain't been round much, lately.
Re: a comment on Camera Obscura by Fear of Garbage	21-Aug-03/8:05 PM
because your work consists of acute observation and introversion, sans emotion. it is not clear at all that you are a chick. you're not posting chick poems. you're not showing any softened edges. the words you post are meticulous. genderless. human.
Re: a comment on fragile by Bill Z Bub	21-Aug-03/7:56 PM
cheddar is the single most popular cheese in the world, bub.
Re: fragile by Bill Z Bub	21-Aug-03/7:55 PM
singular or plural: decide. "to be opened"--superfluous. can it. and "now"--nix that 2. do a little more with the last line--maybe 'tumbke into your sheets'. it's there, waiting for you--go on, man! write the bastard down!
Re: A Surgeons Butchery by SupremeDreamer	21-Aug-03/7:52 PM
this would benefit from the use of one or more poetic devices.
Re: A Manifesto on Murder by Jeremi B. Handrinos	21-Aug-03/7:51 PM
surface snatching the cervix, as fee for service.
Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning	21-Aug-03/7:03 PM
nice build-up. i especially like "sweat so sweet that sour seems discreet". typo: steel, not steal, right? also: "Pain Sparks In my mind Lightly slightly Stimulates And separates Us from them" who is us and who is them? gay/straight? something else? maybe it doesn't need to be explained, because this is about the heat, and i'm not wearing my inflammable cat suit tonight. oh well.
Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa	21-Aug-03/12:20 PM
okay, this is much better now. but can you give me a hint as to why you would prefer a march to a waltz?? perhaps, in the title? is it a parting of way?
Re: trying to cross the border to Sweetgrass by Patsy	21-Aug-03/10:33 AM
i do not understand your line breaks.
Re: not titled by coolassbob	21-Aug-03/7:27 AM
shall i call you ismael? i think you mean subscribe: I do not _subscribe_ to a strict code of ethics.
Re: stop poking me georges seurat by coolassbob	21-Aug-03/7:25 AM
i'll bet georges liked his peas. i wonder what he drank?
Re: A Mod Proposal (of Modest Proportions) by coolassbob	21-Aug-03/7:24 AM
funny. but i dinna see a proposal herein.
Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa	21-Aug-03/7:16 AM
i am selfishly voracious when it comes to words. and i know what it feels like to think i am being clear in my writing, only to see, later, that i was too far inside the idea to communicate it effectively. i just like calling YOU out, dreamer.
Re: a comment on quarter-step (abridged) by richa	21-Aug-03/6:52 AM
where is the correlation between the 1/4 step and the earthwork? more than selfishness, here. personal taste in music, aesthetism, and utility explain these creations. and the question asked here, rhetorically, is will you dine with me. i misunderstand how any of these things can be selfish, richard. unless you mean to say that we have no right to shape anything. we are animals richard; survival and prosperity are different than self-gratification. please explain what you meant, again. i'm feeling particularly dense this morning.
Re: a comment on Thorns by poetandknowit	20-Aug-03/12:46 PM
pig--are you cad? or are you just signed in as laurence? don't fuck with me. i am an advocate.
Re: a comment on Coffle by Wulf	20-Aug-03/9:31 AM
Plastination: fantastic. wish it would come here. Are you liking the new rankers?: a few could use a good flaying. What is your favorite ranker?: p&k What is yout favorite smelling ranker?: settle. Which ranker has the nicest eyes?: you, wingy d. Which ranker has the nicest personality?: i could not say. i don not care for nice personalities. (and where do they keep it?): again, i have never sought such a thing, and so find myself unqualified to answer. Where may i find lovely young rankers?: there are none, of late. supreme dreamer may give you a meaty fight. pinkbunny is a rather amusing young dunce who has a very high opinion of himself. he even posted his blog address. it makes for middling entertainment, when insomnia strikes. hard. I have many more questions but i fear you would not aanswer them: you are so wrong. i will do my best to answer anything you ask, good sir. just one more?: as many as you please. the workload is light today. What is xo?: a shorthand closure, implying affection and how does punctuation work?: you know better than that.
Re: a comment on Stargazing Illusionist by DreamerSupreme	20-Aug-03/9:22 AM
lee? not too long--just done to death before. you are getting la-zeee.
Re: a comment on Wha you funkin wan? by ==Doylum	20-Aug-03/9:19 AM
you mistake my intent, sirrah. it is not flirting, it is smug flippancy. at least according to margaret, and she is a FEATURED POET. it is an entertaing poem, but i would rather hear about the anthropomorphized bacon.
Re: Wha you funkin wan? by ==Doylum	20-Aug-03/9:08 AM
bah. away so long, and this is your triumphant return? BAH!