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Coffle (Other) by Wulf
Midnight, Alexandria Virginia, May 23, 1861 A line of chained men, eighteen in all, struggle to find a rhythm in their leg irons which are chained to their waist to their manacled hands. Each wears a steel collar. A chain connects these so the men are forced to march in a line. They make a coffle. A fat unkempt white man and his young assistant lead the way, their whips dragging in the dust. The coffle is black and will offer no resistance enroute to the Slave Pens. They are the midnight parade, one the giddy white folks won't be bothered to witness. The overseer hands his assistant a coin and the key to the pen. "Jus lock 'em in a cell. We'll separate 'em and spray 'em down tomorrow ' fore the buyers come. Write this down and take it to Mister Birch: 'I got me a dozen an' a half stone breakers. They is long limbed and hard muscled. You wanna beat the sale, come see 'fore ten tomorra mornin'". The youngster pulled a pad from his pocket and wrote furiously. He stuffed the pad back in his pocket, fumbled the key into the lock. The door to the cells opened with a complaining screech. The old man laughed and scratched his groin. "Ya all boys get on in there. That bolt cannot be lifted from the inside." The black men, eyes on the ground before them, shuffled into the dark stinking quarters of the Slave Pen. Here they would sleep and try to hold their water until morning came. Before the door closed behind them, one began to sing. His voice was low and syrupy and cracked like muddy water. He sang: Mister, set your whip down You done cut this body 'way If I never lift that hammer Oh-oh live long day The younger white man banged the door with his whip. "You want I go whup 'em quiet?" The fat man laughed. "I like your brass, boy. You go give Birch that note. Come on back an' if they's still singin', I want you write down them words. I heard tell they's some kinda unnerground railroad an' them songs is signals to old Abe Lincoln hisself. You bring me them darky's words an' I'll tip a pint or two with ya. You go on now!" He gave the padlock a pull to reassure himself and turned to go to his quarters. A voice darker than prison followed him down. Mister Overseer You done sold my Children 'way I am chained here to this hammer Oh-oh live long day Lord as my witness Turn this body back to clay I will bury that old hammer Oh-oh live long day Mama, tell your Children It don't do no good to pray With your hands born to that hammer Oh-oh live long day "Man, it's so dark in here, I can't even see your eyes. Why you keep singin' that ol' song anyway? Ain't nobody listenin', ain't nobody give a care 'bout us." The syrupy voice stopped. Chains rattled a bit and the singing man spoke. "You hear that fat man? Well, I got a bolt in me... that's what I got and it cannot be lifted from the outside. It gets rusty, just like that one on the door. If I want to oil it all I have to do is sing. If you listened, you would know. There's a tall man in a dark hat. He's comin' to break these chains and, when he does, i'm gonna fight in that man's army. That's my dream. I may never find my people but I can offer myself up. Wherever they are, they gon' be free." "You crazy, man. How's that song go? Mind if I sing with ya? Maybe I could go fight in that army with you... They really let a black man shoot and fight..." But the singer was singing: Take a word to Mister Lincoln If he breaks these chains away I will fight them with this hammer Oh-oh live long day The next day the Union army surprised Confederates and captured the Slave Pen but it was empty except for one old man chained to the middle of the floor by the leg and he was singing: Four score and seven If a man is what he say He gon' free me from this hammer Oh-oh live long day

Up the ladder: Too obvious
Down the ladder: Intervention

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6410255
Weighted score: 5.6409965
Overall Rank: 2135
Posted: February 2, 2003 8:23 PM PST; Last modified: February 2, 2003 8:23 PM PST
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.212.215 | 2-Feb-03/10:03 PM | Reply
And then what happened?
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 3-Feb-03/11:35 AM | Reply
Yeah!
[10] god'swife @ 209.179.212.17 | 3-Feb-03/8:13 AM | Reply
Outstanding, thank you. We are all prisoners, and we all hold some part of the key. You touched me, brought me to tears. My tiny tiny almost irrelevant critizism is the repeated use of the words 'chained/chains' at the very beginning, otherwise perfect.
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 6-Feb-03/7:58 PM | Reply
The title had me.
[4] TanHand @ 68.14.26.239 | 11-Feb-03/7:42 PM | Reply
The civil war was about slavery.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Feb-03/10:59 PM | Reply
midnight, my closet... august, hot as shit. where did i put my damn creepers. may day.
[10] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 16-Feb-03/11:02 PM | Reply
Momma me eandome button is going spickanky. i'm going to go work now read script transcribe back suitcase cross fingers go bye.
[2] lastobelus @ 217.226.25.123 | 10-Mar-03/2:21 PM | Reply
henh? prosaic & folksy with occasional braying.
[10] Lord Ganus @ 68.14.26.239 | 10-Apr-03/11:15 PM | Reply
why did the black kid cry when he had diahrehaa?>? He thot he was melting lol asl. 10;
[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.146.90 > Lord Ganus | 22-Jul-03/6:17 PM | Reply
That wouldn't be funny even if you were smart enough to spell diarrhea correctly.
[10] nolan @ 65.93.27.96 | 3-May-03/10:21 PM | Reply
very very long, but i like it -11 (if i could but 10)
[3] Poetsettle @ 68.158.170.115 | 18-May-03/10:36 AM | Reply
I'm confused. Why write a short for Poemranker critique? I do identify with it, though.
[9] RealmOfSong @ 64.254.42.191 | 10-Jun-03/7:00 AM | Reply
I like it.
[2] Crakyamuni @ 140.211.113.86 | 25-Jun-03/10:05 AM | Reply

Lincoln was a REPUBLICAN!
[4] Settle @ 67.75.22.253 | 20-Aug-03/6:23 AM | Reply
let's wife swap, but since none of us is married we can just drink a lot and grope each other awkwardly wait was that out loud.
[7] ==Doylum @ 194.65.14.68 > Settle | 20-Aug-03/8:15 AM | Reply
Yes guffaw guffaw, it was. Although why didn't you use your big letters like normal. Where did you put you big letters?
[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > ==Doylum | 20-Aug-03/8:34 AM | Reply
speedy D! where have you been??? i have missed you, so! you come and go like a fantasy! xo, z
[7] ==Doylum @ 194.65.14.68 > <~> | 20-Aug-03/9:09 AM | Reply
I have been mogalin for the Plastination exhibition in Munchen. As payment i ave been trying to nick some of the meat of the bodies and cook it. Cos some of it looks like bacon (mmmmm).
Are you liking the new rankers?
What is your favorite ranker?
What is yout favorite smelling ranker?
Which ranker has the nicest eyes?
Which ranker has the nicest personality? (and where do they keep it?)
Where may i find lovely young rankers?
I have many more questions but i fear you would not aanswer them
just one more?
What is xo?
and how does punctuation work?
[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 > ==Doylum | 20-Aug-03/9:31 AM | Reply
Plastination: fantastic. wish it would come here.
Are you liking the new rankers?: a few could use a good flaying.
What is your favorite ranker?: p&k
What is yout favorite smelling ranker?: settle.
Which ranker has the nicest eyes?: you, wingy d.
Which ranker has the nicest personality?: i could not say. i don not care for nice personalities.
(and where do they keep it?): again, i have never sought such a thing, and so find myself unqualified to answer.
Where may i find lovely young rankers?: there are none, of late. supreme dreamer may give you a meaty fight. pinkbunny is a rather amusing young dunce who has a very high opinion of himself. he even posted his blog address. it makes for middling entertainment, when insomnia strikes. hard.
I have many more questions but i fear you would not aanswer them: you are so wrong. i will do my best to answer anything you ask, good sir.
just one more?: as many as you please. the workload is light today.
What is xo?: a shorthand closure, implying affection
and how does punctuation work?: you know better than that.
[5] deleted user @ 64.63.203.40 | 30-Aug-03/4:01 PM | Reply
I...uhm..dunno.
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