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Too obvious (Pimple) by INTRANSIT The spots they come
in black and in white.
On old and on young
they plague and they plight.
An oil covered sheen
comes usually with.
After some treatments
you'll look like a sith.
On face and on back
on chest and on rear.
Damn! Here's a new one
inside of my ear.
The smaller and black
are hardest to see.
The larger in white
are easy to squeeze.
And now I am done
so please go on home
stay away from me
and my pim-pl-ey poem.
Up the ladder:
Love spank
Down the ladder:
Coffle
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Posted: July 29, 2003 9:00 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2003 9:00 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.645918 Overall Rank: 2134 Comments:
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29-Jul-03/9:06 PM
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what the hell are you doing up this late? popping zits?
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30-Jul-03/6:04 AM
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I just couldn't resist when no one else had done it. maybe I should try harder. lol
COOL!
Acme.. The plague of teenage youth, that apparently never entirely goes away... 10.
Yes, it's also the plague of Wile E. Coyote too.
get ride of plight it looks forced
other than that a fun poem
"comes usually with.
After some treatments you'll look like a sith." oh, that sure is pimply, all right. but it sounds more like chronic acne!
like I'm really taking this one seriously. Dar... Pardon me. Mr Gayness should have done it. But white is not his gig. Dig?
Very funny. "Plight" doesn't belong somehow, but the end makes up for it. I LOL, really I did.
Solidarity amongst pimples of all colors! Except for those big swollen red ones, those are untouchables.
Ha! Cheers.
Finally, someone who feels my pain
Have you ever got a zit in your ear?!!!!!! It's fucking murder.
Every time I read something by SupremeDreamer.
"After some treatments
you'll look like a sith." Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem. 293 view(s)
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