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Pimple № 58105

Too obvious

Member since 2002 · Posted 29 Jul 2003 · 15 comments

The spots they come in black and in white. On old and on young they plague and they plight. An oil covered sheen comes usually with. After some treatments you'll look like a sith. On face and on back on chest and on rear. Damn! Here's a new one inside of my ear. The smaller and black are hardest to see. The larger in white are easy to squeeze. And now I am done so please go on home stay away from me and my pim-pl-ey poem.

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[n/a] <~> 29-Jul-03/9:06 PM Reply
what the hell are you doing up this late? popping zits?
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 30-Jul-03/6:04 AM Reply
I just couldn't resist when no one else had done it. maybe I should try harder. lol
[10] loveisendless 29-Jul-03/9:06 PM Reply
COOL!
[10] thepinkbunnyofdoom 29-Jul-03/9:21 PM Reply
Acme.. The plague of teenage youth, that apparently never entirely goes away... 10.
[n/a] INTRANSIT › thepinkbunnyofdoom 30-Jul-03/6:20 AM Reply
Yes, it's also the plague of Wile E. Coyote too.
[7] richa 29-Jul-03/11:32 PM Reply
get ride of plight it looks forced

other than that a fun poem
[n/a] <~> 30-Jul-03/6:14 AM Reply
"comes usually with.
After some treatments
you'll look like a sith."

oh, that sure is pimply, all right. but it sounds more like chronic acne!
[n/a] INTRANSIT › <~> 30-Jul-03/6:18 AM Reply
like I'm really taking this one seriously. Dar... Pardon me. Mr Gayness should have done it. But white is not his gig. Dig?
[7] god'swife 30-Jul-03/8:40 AM Reply
Very funny. "Plight" doesn't belong somehow, but the end makes up for it. I LOL, really I did.
[9] http://mulberryfairy 30-Jul-03/7:00 PM Reply
Solidarity amongst pimples of all colors! Except for those big swollen red ones, those are untouchables.
[8] horus8 30-Jul-03/9:01 PM Reply
Ha! Cheers.
[10] BiggRobb 3-Jan-04/12:59 AM Reply
Finally, someone who feels my pain
[8] horus8 3-Jan-04/1:32 AM Reply
Have you ever got a zit in your ear?!!!!!! It's fucking murder.
[n/a] Everyone › horus8 3-Jan-04/4:41 AM Reply
Every time I read something by SupremeDreamer.
[9] Blindpoetry 3-Jan-04/6:30 AM Reply
"After some treatments
you'll look like a sith."

Is that a Star Wars reference? lol Sounds a lot like it... Nice poem.