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Too obvious (Pimple) by INTRANSIT

The spots they come in black and in white. On old and on young they plague and they plight. An oil covered sheen comes usually with. After some treatments you'll look like a sith. On face and on back on chest and on rear. Damn! Here's a new one inside of my ear. The smaller and black are hardest to see. The larger in white are easy to squeeze. And now I am done so please go on home stay away from me and my pim-pl-ey poem.

INTRANSIT 30-Jul-03/6:18 AM
like I'm really taking this one seriously. Dar... Pardon me. Mr Gayness should have done it. But white is not his gig. Dig?




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