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stop poking me georges seurat (Free verse) by coolassbob
stop poking me Georges Seurat you've made your point is that bustle big enough Georges? she is modern after all the child's face is muddled Georges lost track of youth? I can tell Georges you're in for the long run you've been at this awhile splendid day outside won't you see it? everyone's enjoying the waterfront but are you, your window view? you must be a perfectionist stop poking me Georges you've made your point.

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Weighted score: 5.1666665
Overall Rank: 5070
Posted: August 20, 2003 8:58 PM PDT; Last modified: August 20, 2003 8:58 PM PDT
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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 20-Aug-03/10:33 PM | Reply
When I point you'll know because, your brain will be doing pull ups off of my index finger while a yacht toots in approval in the distance, and my forearm is a sweet street sign through your left eye.
[8] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 21-Aug-03/7:25 AM | Reply
i'll bet georges liked his peas.

i wonder what he drank?
[n/a] ecargo @ 167.219.32.10 > <~> | 21-Aug-03/8:18 AM | Reply
Wine? Pernod? Absinthe? Assuredly. Dirty water? (Didn't he die young of disentery? Oh--nope, diptheria. Nevermind.)
[6] Rilke4ClosetLesbians @ 67.121.78.126 | 21-Aug-03/3:49 PM | Reply
Uhhh...I think if he read this, he'd laugh in your puffy-eyed face! Nonetheless, this takes neurotic to another level. 6.
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