Free verse № 62550
Picasso: A Painters Revenge
Oh good ole Picasso,
how could you go so low?
To beat a woman one night
lasts only a while
concerning the damage,
depending on how much
absinthe you drank.
That was just the beginning.
But then you clasped that brush
and painted their faces;
the once soft beautiful symmetry
molded into disarray
with your own hands.
Those rough hands captured
their pain and disfigurement
for eternity, creating paintings
that are adored and praised,
and will be for the rest of history.
A poets words can be buried
among pages, but bright colors
can never be tuned out of the mind
of the world, never.
8 comments
look.. "Hand".. would you mind jerking me off a lil? im a bit hard, and i dont think a retard like you would mind.. so, want to do a chap a favor? eh?
has the same nice form of your other poems but....
'bright colours can never be tuned out of the mind'
where have i heard that.... halmark/johnk/a daniel bedingfield song?
whether i deserve the low marks, -shrug- i couldnt give a shit. settle, dark angel, and the holy choir can sing about my "shitty" writing for the rest of eternity and choke for all i care.
thanks for your comment and crit, always been usefull and constructive.
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